This is what I have come up with, hoping I am within time limit - After asking some of my friends for honest feedback: one of my friends said they read it aloud in 25 sec, another in the marketing bus. gave it 2 thumbs up as well, of course there was another who wanted me to add nore descriptive.
Imagine yourself resting in the shade of majestic oaks, or basking in the sun by a refreshing pool, then sleeping in a cloud of luxury with down comforters and pillows. Awaken to a savory breakfast prepared just for you. No need to dream – make it reality! "Copperhead" Bed and Breakfast just north of My City www.my website
Great for a girls weekend or a romantic getaway. (mention "radio call letters" for a welcome gift)
This air time begins next Monday, for 2 weeks. It is still warm here, with swimming & sunning well into Oct. so mentioning the pool I think is still a go. We do not have special tubs. And while we do offer massage packages - I make only $10 per massage so would be promoting my therapist, not me! And knowing how people listen, some may think it is included in the room rate - or they will think they can come here just for a massage. People think crazy thoughts - just like some who tell me "oh, we will have to come by for breakfast some morning"..